Dr. Aliana Sinclair continues to have mixed emotions about Ba'al. Sam begins to doubt Jack's commitment to starting a family.
When two Taneyan alians visit the SGC, a mission is launched that will change lives forever. This leads Vala to confront a haunting truth about her past.
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Gen. Johnathan (Jack) O'Neill
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Thanks for the pics. This was a great story! Love emotional Vala!
ReplyDeleteI just found this. I read a lot of SG-SG1 fanfiction and I appreciate the effort, so I feel bad about hitting you with the things I don't like first, since I will continue reading and enjoying this. But I hope my comments will help. I don't like the script-like form of the dialogue since you then immediately shifts into very long descriptions. Either you take the time to write the story properly or just write a script. This in-between thing is just bad $& annoying literary style. Also, I am feeling quite rushed at the very beginning, which is where I am.... but will continue on. And finally, why do all the paragraph with sexual content need to be on a different color? We are all adults here. That is kind of insulting. Please change these things. Thank you for sharing; I hope you appreciate my honesty. I like the all the rest.
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